MY STAR RATING
Forbidden love…is undeniable.
When she was younger, like all little girls, Sophie Hawkins believed in fantasies. She believed in happily-ever-after and that one day her prince would come. What made Sophie’s dreams a bit different was that the man of her dreams wasn’t a fictional prince but her best friend’s dad.
Matt was handsome and nice, the kind of man every woman would want.
Time passes, and through the years, Sophie’s reality changes, yet her attraction and memories of Matt Hamilton never fade. Where boys and men are concerned, Matt remains her gold standard.
When his daughter was young, Matt Hamilton had it all: a family and success.
With the ticking of the clock and changing of the calendar, seasons pass and situations adjust. Business success remains, but personally, his world changes…until the day fate sets the undeniable in motion.
Sophie was a sweet little girl, his daughter’s best friend, and a ray of undeniable sunshine. That was before. Now she’s more. She is a grown woman.
Who can deny the undeniable?
Okay, I need to make sure I pay attention to what I’m signing up for because for some reason I was sure this was a full-length novel but it is, in fact, a novella.
Now, I’ll be honest. Novellas are not usually my jam.
There are only a couple of authors out there who can really pull me in and make me feel like I’m not missing out on anything when they write a novella so I went into this a tad cautiously.
Sophie is a sweet girl. She’s intelligent and loving and is just starting out in life and figuring out what she wants to do.
She keeps herself to herself mostly and doesn’t have too many friends.
At the end of a party that she helped plan with her boss, she bumps into the man she’s been fantasising about ever since she was a little girl.
It was her best friend’s dad, Matt.
She actually hasn’t seen her bestie for years due to life doing what it does, yady, yady yada.
Anyway, when she realises that there is possibly a chance to make her wildest fantasy a reality she’s kinda like “Hmm…should I go there?”.
I liked Sophie but I felt she came across as a timid and naive girl and therefore was surprised by how she acted when things got hot, ye ken?
Right from the very start, this dude was all about getting the knickers aff the lass!
There was zero concern in him about the age gap, the fact that he had known her well as a child or that his daughter and Sophie’s family might not be too cool with the situation.
Pretty much immediately he decides (without really feeling her out about the whole thing) that she’s gonna marry him and have his babies.
And she’s kinda like “…but dude…I’m about to start college and get my education game goin’” Okay she may have been smoother with her words than me but you get the idea.
How he reacts isn’t so much as a Dom/Daddy (in my opinion) would but rather as an arrogant controlling ass. Yup, there’s a difference 🙂
His body stiffens. “None of that dorm shit. You’re living with me. There’s no way I’m leaving you alone with college boys.” “Why would I want a boy when I have a man?” His chest rises and falls. “I trust you. It’s them I don’t trust.” “My grandparents…” Matt takes a deep breath. “Okay. We can ease them into it. Is your first semester paid?” I nod. “Including housing?” “Yes… Sir,” I add with a grin. Matt shakes his head. “Be careful. I’m ready to take you again.”
And I’m going to be honest…again, lol, I got a little bit of an…off vibe. He talked about how he knew even from when she was little that she was special.
Maybe I’m reading too far into it.
“Breathe for me.” As her tits push toward me, I plunge, deep and fast. Her pussy is so tight, I feel like I’m forcing myself into a condom three sizes too small. She’s strangling me, and it’s the most painful pleasure I’ve ever felt. I’m not all the way in when I meet resistance, the cherry she left for me that was mine since I first met her. Sophie’s body tenses as I push through, going where no one has gone before. I kiss a tear from her cheek.
Becky’s mother and I went through our problems—we even tried counselling with a sex therapist, Dr. Kizer—and over time, I forgot about the sweet little girl with the big blue eyes. I moved on with my life and my business. Things went well with business. It dominated my world. I’ve been extremely successful. My personal life side not so much. And then I stumbled across something about Sophie on one of my daughter’s Facebook memories. I dug a little more and learned about the loss of Sophie’s parents and her struggles. It broke my heart to think of the carefree happy girl being sad. I watched from afar.
FINAL THOUGHTS on UNDENIABLE by Aleatha Romig
I just couldn’t connect with the book the way it was intended. And I don’t think it was because of it being a shorter book,
There’s a good bit of dirty talk tough, lol, and if you just want a filthy, naughty wee book to read in one sitting then this is the one for you.
Thank you for reading!
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